Thursday, May 5, 2011

We have been learning about Personification. Personification is when a non human thing is given human characteristics,

The slide
My slide remembers getting wet from the rain and people playing on it. It’s happy that it’s yellow and hard. It feelssquishy bottoms on it. My slide hopes for a paint job. It listens to the people. My slide looks forward to the people going to play on it.
By Thom and Greison-ray


My playground


The playground is afraid because it’s rusty and might break.
The chains crinkle when they move.
The playground feels sad when you fall off the chains.
by Nik and  Ashton



The pole.
Pole  remembers when he got put in place.
He feels happy when it is sunny.
Pole feels sad when  it rains because he gets wet
Pole  hears the children  shout.
Pole  hears the rain thump on the ground.
He feels happy when the tree talks to him.
By Maia.




The Slide
 The slide remembers all the children going down him.
The slide feels happy when children keep him  clean.
 The slide looks forward  to being clean and dry.
When children go down him he feels like saying ” Hey”.
He hates people going down him.
He does not like it in winter because it’s freezing.
By Elyas and Daniel



The   goal.
It remembers when it got put here
When we get a goal it is happy
He dreams about winning the next world cup
It  is fun to play with him
When it rains he needs cover


The desk
My desk remembers when he got a big scratch on him. It feels people writing.
My desk hears screaming and lots of talking.
It remembers when we first met.
By Sidney


The leaf
It has got holes in it because caterpillars ate it.
It feels sad because everyone stomps on it.
It feels sad because it’s losing it’s colours.
It feels cold when it’s cold outside.
It feels sad because it fell down from the tree .
By Sehyun






The tree
The tree remembers when it was planted.
He likes it when his leaves turn rusty but he doesn't like it when his leaves fall off.
He feels sad when children aren’t around.






Tree                                                                     
The tree remembers when it first grew its leaves.
It  listens to all the things I say.
The tree takes good care of me.
 The tree feels sad when it the rains.
The rain goes on leaf to leaf.
The tree says nice things to me.
 The tree is the best
By Malia

My Friendly Tree.

My tree hears all the children yelling and screaming.

She crys when the rain falls onto it.

My tree remembers when she first got planted.

She remembers when it first was a baby seed.

My tree felt happy because she knew she would grow bigger.

She likes it when people hug her.

By Kowhai


The  Rubbish  Bin
The rubbish bin remembers when he first got put in place.
The  bin  had  fun  when  he   was  riding  on  a  truck  to  school.
He cries when he gets slapped with a paintbrush.
He  sometimes  feels  sad  when  people  drop  rubbish   in  him  because  it  hurts  him.
                            By  Holly